Friday 13 June 2014

Jessica's story about her weekend



This is Jessica's story about her weekend.

We all really liked it because she added 4 details about her experience.

Room 14 want to go and see this movie too, because Jessica said it was cool!

What day did you go and watch that movie, Jessica?


8 comments:

  1. Ooh, I really want to see that movie, Jessica! I really liked how you used such excellent punctuation in your story - do you think you could come and teach my girls how to do that? :)

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    1. Thank you Mr Dawson for your compliment, Jessica is a bit too shy to come to your classroom but one day she might be brave enough to come to your class.

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  2. wow that art lookes amazing

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  3. great work guys kepp it up


    justin rm13

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  4. Well done Jessica! I like how you told us exactly what you did then you said how you felt about it too. Great stuff, keep it up : )

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    1. Thank you Miss Breen, we all try to write some really interesting stories.

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